Archangel Michael - story

I wrote a story recently, which I have linked to my Profile page. It is 5,000 words long and if anyone is interested in it, and has the time to read it, please feel free to comment on whether the story makes sense to you or not; or in other words if you like the story or not, etc. It is loosely based on a true story. I enjoy writing. Some of the poems I have written to date, are on the Poetry page of my personal website (of which the link is on my Profile page also). A direct link to my story is below. Regards, Celine.

http://lightworkers.org/myspace/starwise/prose